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Sela Locke

  • Those Little Glass Slippers (1)

    I started this on a whim after watching the Disney version of 'Cinderella' again. I certainly appreciate any and all reviews, although I don't need nitpicks so much as advice. ...

    8 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (2)

    Next installment! Any and all reviews appreciated, although I don't, as I said before, need nitpicking so much as comments on the story itself. “Maria! Mariadelle!” called Mother, voice cracking ...

    13 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (3)

    Welcome back! Sorry it took me so long to get this bit on! It's rated PG-13 'cause... Prince Kharles is dumb. More or less. Just watch out. Another vase shattered, ...

    19 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (4)

    Thanks to all you faithful followers of this fatefully fanatic tale! I know it mayn't look like I've taken all your advice, but right now, I'm rather more writing than ...

    19 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (5)

    Well, she's back, for better or worse. I couldn't edit until I had feedback on the whole story anyhow. And stop asking questions that'll be answered later in the story! ...

    13 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (6)

    PG-13 for suggestive themes and a lickle violence. Do as I have directed you, servants! Revision to be done when all the chapters have been reviewed by my faithful critiquers. ...

    11 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (7)

    A short, merry-faced man hopped out of the carriage, blue eyes twinkling in the light of his lantern. “You’re a brave one, and no mistake. And who’re these other gentlemen ...

    11 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (8)

    Finally! At last! After all these long years! Editing on the later chapters has been done, and editing on the earlier will soon be underway. Answers should be questioned, my ...

    10 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (9)

    PG-13 for suggestive theeeeemes. Or something. Remember: advice, nitpicks not needed! ;) Days after that first one passed with haste, and I lost track of time rather easily. Hare was ...

    9 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (10)

    PG-13 again for suggestive themes. If you wanted Raymond to be a good guy, I beg you to consider skipping these next couple chapters entirely. ;_; Enjoy, otherwise. “Oh, ‘Annah, ...

    11 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (12)

    The room I met King Manfred in for the second time was simple, nearing dull. A long, low table, with countless chairs lining it on both sides, all carved after ...

    14 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (13)

    Not my favorite bit, for sure. The overview from last chapter is in italics:“You try my patience sorely, Mademoiselle Tadstreet. I have saved your life, and pulled you from the ...

    12 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (14)

    I was in a forest.Before aught else, I looked down to survey my clothing. A sound much akin to a piglet’s squeal jumped from my mouth, and after that a ...

    6 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (15)

    A while later – and considering my situation, it is surprising I managed to gauge the time at all – Narryck paused in his tripping and crashing through the forest, ...

    5 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (16)

    Mildly confusing. No nitpicks please, and I beg of you, don't ask questions when they even might be answered later--unless it's absolutely crucial that they be answered right this second. ...

    5 min read
  • Those Little Glass Slippers (17)

    Rated 16+ for some sexual content and nudity-ish. No nitpicks--honest opinions please!I could hear the guard and Sergeant Kulpeper – or so they called him – arguing beyond the white ...

    14 min read


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